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Posted 19 December 2010 - 10:21 AM

I'm writing a story about a girl, Mona, who's family has disowned her.
it starts off describing how she live with her sister, ????, and her mom,??? and dad, ???. she every night she sneaks out to get away from her strict mother and non-caring father. one night she goes a bit far. she is returned back to her family in handcuffs. her parents, convinced that the reason for her behavior is because of a drug habit, they send her to rehab. where meeting another girl, ???, with black hair and tan skin who's convinced the place is out to get her. together they bond. but soon, ???'s stories get to her and she's starting to envision the nurses putting poison in every drink they give her. she watches every look between every person she sees. convinced that they are exchanging word with looks. she starts mumbled and yelling at them close they eyes. slowly but surely she goes in insane. her parents put her into an asylum where she's in isolation almost all the time. she starts talking to herself, drawing closed eyes and sinking farther and farther into herself.
after three years of being locked up in a white, bare room. someone ??? comes to visit her. an old friend. he starts talking to her, but she only sits and stares at him. trying to remember him. slowly, after days of pulling her own hair out, literally, she begins to recognize him. he's the one who called the police on her. he's the one who started this change reaction.

so, well, it's not the best story but...you know. so names.
sister: prepy, out going, selfish.
mother: strict and like to pry into other's busniess.
father: quiet and withdrawn.
girl at rehab: secretive
boy: caring but unthinking

thanks :)




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