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[TeaganRose]

Hello everyone! I am currently writing a new Teen Fic story. It is about a guy who is super popular and handsome (you know, the cliche), but hasn't had a girlfriend for too long since he is tired of all the superficial love. So when the prom comes, his half-sister (they have the same mother) and his best friend (who's in love with his sister), decide to search a good girl for him.

They are pretty close to each other, and have known each other for ages. They live in England and their names are pretty much British. I will give you a description of them, in order to help you.

Guy A: he has blonde hair, fair skin and blue eyes. He likes sports and to talk a lot. He's out on weekends, but still manages to get excellent grades. He loves to read and watch movies, and in his free time he likes to write poems, even though they are not good. When being with his sister and his best friend, when is a disaster. Here, I considered Miles.

Girl A (aka sister): she has dirty blonde hair, golden skin and blue eyes. She is an outgoing girl, and super smart. She is a little bit boyish, and extremely badass. Everyone likes her because she says what she thinks and doesn't like to lie about it. She looks up to her brother because she finds him an extremely hardworking person and he does not look for the outside. If you think it is important, she is bisexual. Here, I considered Hattie.

Guy B: he has dark hair, fair skin and blue eyes. He is a nightmare for teachers and a daydream for girls. He is mysterious and sarcastic. He has always been in love with Girl A but keeps if a secret since he doesn't want to mess up their friendship. He has family problems, so that's why he lives in an apartment with Guy A. He likes extreme sports and rock (specially Aerosmith, Queen and The Rolling Stones). Here, I considered Noah.

Thank you all and take your time.

[Katie-Nana]

As far as I know, they do not have Prom in England, however, they may have formals of another kind.  You may want to research it. 

 

Brother: I like Miles.  Maybe: Nicholas, Oliver, Graham, Colin, Damian, Peter, Thomas.

Sister: I also like Hattie.  Maybe: Victoria, Natalie, Hayley, Lindsey, Georgina, Andrea, Gemma

Friend: Noah is okay.  What about: Adam, Mark, Luke, Philip, Dean, Sean, Justin

[HxppySxng]

Katie is correct, we don't have prom here. At my school, we had the Girls-Ask-Guys Social, which was basically a dance but without the fancy dresses. I guess an end of the year formal would be more similar to a prom.

 

Guy A: Alistair, Duncan

 

Girl A: Imogen!!!

 

Guy B: Alfie, Jasper, Lachlan

[MommaMeg]

I really like Miles. Maybe you could use: Milo, Hugo, Oliver, or George.

Girl: Penelope, Victoria, Daphne

For the other guy, I kept thinking Jax sounded like a rocker name 😀

[MusicCharm]

I think the names you've considered are great, but here are some others

 

For the girl: Lucy, Thea, Gwen, Talia

For the guys: Leo, Matthew or Matt, Felix, Jordan, Dylan

[taylor4]

Boy A: Joel, Toby, Liam

 

Girl A: Darcy, Andrea (Andi), Willow

 

Boy B: Oliver, Blake, Zac

 

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http://www.babynameg...showtopic=31054

[GustyLeaves]

Guy A: Kaden
Girl A: Carly
Guy B: Zachary

Suggest a name for my harvest moon child: http://www.babynameg...showtopic=31150

[Madeleine Tran]

I like the story and description. However, I feel like you should add a really big complicated twist in your book, but it's your decision! Your character's descriptions seem very interesting but those are all mostly stated in the beginning.

 

Guy A: I consider "Miles" to usually be a person who has brown hair. But it could work. Jason (not really poetic, though) usually comes to mind, along with Taylor, Everest (could be brown-haired too), and Kyle.

 

Girl A: I (personally) don't like the name Hattie, for some weird reason. It reminds me of dishes and rags... maybe I'm thinking of Ella Enchanted, haha! Anyway: I have a friend in real-life who is your exact description and her name is Jordan. J.J. is her basic nickname. Here are some other names though: Cecilia, Nicole, or Sadie.

 

Guy B: I think you nailed it with Noah. Perfect name, probably. The description is only on what I disagree, but it still could totally work. However, I usually consider "old" names when it comes to the mysterious characters. Here's only ONE (sorry!) suggestion I can think of right now: Aiden.

 

Hope this helps!