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So I have the rough draft of a story for third graders tomorrow and I have the idea for the story. There's a little girl (Molly?) ________ _________ Lancer. Her parent _______ ________ and _________ ________ Lancer. Her mom is pregnant and the little girl really wants a sister. She can share her dolls, her clothes everything! But one day, her dad picks her up early from school to bring her to see her new sibling, a brother, _________ _________ Lancer. She ignores him, wants to trade him, and all around is mad at her parents. Eventually ________ ________ Lancer starts to grow up and follows (Molly?) around and mimiks her. Then she starts to love him. By this time, Molly's mom is pregnant again and again (Molly?) wants another sister. But behold, another little brother _________ _______ Lancer. Then she's happy with it and decides to love him. The END! LOL.

These people don't need middle names (Only the girl and the little boys). They don't need to be well thought out!

Here are some descriptions:

Mr. ____?___ Lancer: He's on the taller side, brown hair, brown eyes and rectangular brown glasses. He commonly wears solid color t-shirts. Khaki pants with a belt. He's really nice and loves his wife and kids. He also works at microsoft (Won't be mentioned in the story.)

Mrs. ___?___ Lancer: She's a little bit shorter than her husband. She has blonde hair which is pretty frizzy, but not curly. She has blue eyes, and brown rectangular glasses. She wears a pink maturnity shirt in the story and jeans. She is a stay-at-home mom.

CHILDREN:

(Molly?) ______ Lancer: She has red hair, freckles and green eyes. She is really sweet and cute. She is about 7 years old. She wears Orange, Yellow and green flowered dresses in the story with a orange or yellow sash. She atteneds Baker Street Christian School.

_______ _______ Lancer: He is the oldest boy in the family. He is a newborn at the beginning and about three at the end. He has only a little bit of hair that is light brown. He has his mothers blue eyes and his dads picture perfect smile.

________ _______ Lancer: He is the youngest Lancer. He is a newborn in the story. He has his dads brown hair and brown eyes. He looks a lot like (Molly?) and his brother, but is still his own person.

Any help would be WONDERFUL!

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OK, got the names:

Kurt Tyler Lancer - Dad
Krista Jade Lancer - Mom
Molly Brooke Lancer - Little Girl
Benjamin Heath Lancer - Little Boy
Luke Jeffery Lancer - Little Baby