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[Mad Hatter]

I'm writing a story about a teenage girl who moves to new town and uncovers the towns biggest cover up, the murder of a high school teacher by the then mayor 12 years before. It also deals with her dysfunctional family. I need to know if the names fit.

?Carol Lauren Gillesby nn Carly?- She's the main character, age 15. She's just moved to a new town. She's quite outgoing and often feeds of the energy of others. She loves history and English, while hates Science and Math, even if she's got a B average in all classes. She has dark brown hair and green eyes. She gets along pretty well, but when she doesn't like someone she avoids them like the plague.

?Diane Carol Matthews?- She's Carly's mom, age 40. She is a stay-at-home mom. Her kids always come first. She can be strict because she expects her kids to do the best they can, but is very funny and has sarcastic sense of humor. She has blue eyes and blonde hair.

?Harry William Matthews?- Carly's step-dad, 38. He loves his step-kids and thinks of them as his own, because he has been married to Diane since Carly was 2. He works in finance for a big furniture company and was resently transfered. He is not as strict as Diane and often spoils the kids, causing problems between him and Diane. Redhair and blue eyes.

?Thomas Alexander Gillesby nn Tommy?- Carly's real dad, 41. He is a magazine photographer and writer who travels all over the world. He is very much a funloving free-spirit and very childish. He and Harry are now freinds, though the relationship started of ruff, and he and Diane who used to be best friends before they had kids have reverted back to being friends. Curly brown hair, brown eyes.

?Zachary Thomas Gillesby nn Zach?- Carly's older brother, 21. He is studying to become a lawyer and often says he hates his dysfunctional family and can't stand to be around them. Besides all of this he loves Carly often saying she is the 'only normal one.' He has curly light brown hair and brown eyes.

?Kelsey Diane Gillesby?- Carly's older sister, 18. She is very rebellious, recovering from a drug adiction, though she has relasped a few times and now run away from home. She has put the family through a lot, cause lots of problem between Diane, Tommy, and Harry, as well as Zach and the whole family. curly blonde hair and green eyes.

?Abigail Sophia Matthews nn Abbey?- Carly's half-sister, 3. She is rambunction and high energy. She is often following Carly around, which Carly hates. She is pretty much your average high-active preschooler, though she has yet to start preschool even though she can already read. strawberry blonde hair blue eyes.

?Luke William Matthews?- Carly's half-brother, 15 months. He spends his day toddling after Abbey and Carly. Carly loves him because he is teddy bear and loves to hug. He is very social with some and shy with others. He has red hair and blue eyes.

Thanks -Ainsie