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[ashooles]

I have this story that I get out occasionally and add to. My problem is, there is one character I change the name of every time, because I always seem to forget his name. And truthfully, I never like the name I give him.

Here's the plot line of the story:
It is based around a young, newly married couple James and Christina *Christie* Lismore. They met when they were both in their teens and James was in a dangerous gang with his three brothers. He was never into as much as what the rest of them were to start with (robbery, shoot outs etc) he more just participated in robberies. Then he met Christie (not sure how yet, any ideas?) and he wanted complete out of his brothers' gang. Eventually he sets them up and puts them in jail, which naturally, his three brothers are less then impressed about and they make it a personal mission to "get him back".
James and Christie escape and for a few years, they live with a good friend as flat mates. They get married and then move away together. Both of them agree to not have kids, because James doesn't want his children to have a father who was once "bad" lol. But Christie gets pregnant anyway and they have Aaliyah May. When she is only a few weeks old, his brothers come to their house while they are sleeping and they almost kidnap Aaliyah, but James stops them (he hears voices through the baby monitor). From then on, they begin to live in fear that his brothers will find them and hurt them all.

Aaah you didn't really need to know all that, but my point is I need a name for one of my brothers.
The oldest brother is Kurt and then the third brother is Lake, but I need a name for the middle brother. Preferably something "evilish" seeing as they are corrupt. They also have a sister called Maria if that helps, but she isn't really in it at all.

[Mariel]

Victor, Monroe, Holden

[Ruthy]

Sounds like a really good story! Some names are: Xavier, Nathan, Mitch, Frank

[ashooles]

^^Thanks both of you, I really like Mitch and Monroe. Hmmm...

[Katie-Nana]

I think Monroe with nn Roe would be nice...since all the other brothers have one syllable names.

Kurt, Roe, Lake & James

[ashooles]

I am kind of leaning towards Mitch at the moment, the only problem is, I know someone by that name. But then again, I dont think he will ever read it

[dancingT-Owl]

i like Mitch. it has the bad guy sound, but not the evilish look. if you know what i mean. Monroe(Roe) is okay, but i don't really think that it sounds bad or evil.

some other names i think would go good are Jason,Colton and Micheal. hope it helps