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[dancingT-Owl]

When the king of Droushan is suddenly missing in the cold and treacherous land of PerNeuge, his family back home is worried sick and tensions are running high. But in PerNeuge, King Aagan is safe and content in the home of Maewynn O'dellen and her family. But when Maewynn's mother suddenly start's taking her abusive husband's side, Maewynn and her sister run with Aagan and his men.
When Aagan returns with Maewynn in tow as a reward for saving his life, Lady Liecia is anything but grateful. Wanting to be Aagan's wife and Queen of Droushan drives her and her servant to some extreme motions, trying to get rid of Maewynn as the Aagan warms towards the poor and cold girl. But Maewynn and her identical sister find out much more then threat of Lady Liecia. They find love, power and money can lead some people to do things horribly twisted and it's up to them to set it right as best they can and hold on to each other which in times, seems like the most impossible thing to do.



If you don't like any of the choices, suggestions are always welcome

[ashooles]

Sounds like a cool story and because it's fantasy (I'm assuming so), I don't think any title with 'love' in it really fits. I've always had a problem with this in fantasy stories. It's ok to have it in the story, just not the title.

So, I voted Motions of Power and Running in Circles.

I love the title Motions of Power. It seems to reall suit the story.

[dancingT-Owl]

Thank you, i wasn't sure....the title is always the hardest thing. i really didn't want love to be in the title because it really isn't just a romance story. it had a lot more in it, but i thought why not...thanks so much

[Katie-Nana]

I sort of agree with you on the love thing.

However, what exactly is Motions of Power??? Is Power motioning to someone??

I think Power should be in the title but Motions of Power doesn't really mean anything.

Maybe ...

For the Love of Power
Circles of Power
Twisted Power / The Twist of Power

[dancingT-Owl]

Good point.....i really like The Twist of Power or Twisted Power it kinda goes with the whole have the power and twisting it to do something horrible and Maewynn eventually is Queen so she is twisting the power away from Lady Liecia and whoever else is trying to hurt her in Twisted way..
..Circles of Power is really nice to but really there's nothing circular about it. the power doesnt circle around to other people from the people who already have the power(sorry about the riddle )

love the suggestions.....anybody have anymore?? lol