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[taylor4]

Hello there I am writing a fan fiction story where 2 brothers are reunited with there sister 15 years after she is born, they assumed she died with her mother while she was pregnant. I have three title ideas so let me know which one you like best or you are welcome to suggest a title. 

1.Long Lost Sister, 2. Salvatore Sister, or 3. Daisy Salvatore.

[Barbie]

Salvatore Sister sounds cool!

[Riley_Jane]

There all fine, but none really stand out enough that I would pick it up (sorry if that's harsh, I figure you probably want honesty. Feel free to tell me to keep my opinions to myself!). Also, just out of curiosity, is this a Vampire Diaries fanfic? If so, I've thought about something similar, but never wrote anything haha!

 

What about:

 

Daisy- Just the first name leaves me wondering who she is and why she's important

The Late Bloom- Plays off the fact that the reunion is late and she's named after a flower

The Blood That Bonds- I only suggest this based on the assumption it is a Vampire Diaries fanfic

 

Good luck! Let me know if you like any!

[taylor4]

Melanie_Cora I appreciate the feedback, I don`t think it`s that harsh. By the way this is for a Vampire Diaries fan faction. I like the title the blood that bonds but how about binds instead of bonds? I`m not going with the second title because I am not set on her name yet, she might not even have a flower name. Also my character is not a vampire so would it be weird to have the word blood in the title because Stefan and Damon will be vampires? 

[Riley_Jane]

I think The Blood That Binds sounds great! I don't think there's an issue using the title even if your character is not a vampire, blood binds family. I think it's a nice play on words with any of the characters being vampires.

 

Best of luck!

[Barbie]

I agree that it still works well for your story. Great title!

[taylor4]

Thank You for the feedback I am either going to go with Salvatore Sister or The Late Bloom (If I give her a flower name). I did love the blood that binds but I am afraid that the title will give off the impression that my main character is a vampire.