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#1 toydog16r

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Posted 30 March 2009 - 10:40 AM

The story begins in 2010 with four friends, nicknamed 'The Pancake Bandits' discovering a Photo on one of their haunts, of one members relations... the story quickly goes back to 1978 where a bunch of five friends nicknamed THE NUTTERS, live and breathe. It follows the nutters as they grow up until the moment where one is forced to grow up.

I'm not sure on the younger characters names what do you think?

Modern characters
Arianna Quay: The leader of the group. Blonde highly intelligent (18)
Bridget "Briggie" Kelden: The eldest but wicked one of group. (19)
Matt Phillips: Aspiring musician - born same year and day as Lindy
Gwen O'Driscoll: Also musician. Into anime.


My elder characters names are:
Jayne Kelden: The second eldest- a wannabe journo. Briggies aunt
Jessica "Jessie" Kelden: Briggie's mother in the future
Hugh Devlin: Wannabe comedian. Wicked and intelligent
Jules McKenna: The Musician of the group. He never intends on growing up
Zak Summers: The best friend and mediator

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Posted 30 March 2009 - 01:28 PM

I love all of the modern characters but whose Lindy?????

As for your older characters name's I think that Jayne and Jessica are both to modern. THe spelling of Jayne looks to modern and would look better as just Jane.

Hope this helps!

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Posted 30 March 2009 - 07:52 PM

I would have to agree with Toribethh on this one, but other than that, the names seem dead on with the character descriptions!!

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Posted 31 March 2009 - 03:27 PM

I agree with Toribethh too! GL! ~Hayden

#5 toydog16r

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Posted 12 April 2009 - 08:27 AM

I love all of the modern characters but whose Lindy?????

As for your older characters name's I think that Jayne and Jessica are both to modern. THe spelling of Jayne looks to modern and would look better as just Jane.

Hope this helps!




THANK YOU! I changed it and it did look better :)




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