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#1 mercymicolejones

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Posted 23 September 2013 - 12:13 PM

I'm writing a TLM fanfiction called Little Memories and I'm stuck on naming the chapter :-( here's what the chapter is about:

Melody quickly swam toward a rock and checked around to make sure she wasn't followed, nodding to herself she pulled open a secret hatch, hidden by sea moss and coral, revealed a door leading into a shipwreck. She was about to enter when all of a sudden a voice made her jump from her tail.

"And where do you think you're going?" Tip said behind her.

"Tip! You scared me to death!" Melody fumed giving the little penguin a push.

"Sorry" he giggled "I figured you would be here after the fight with your mom" 

"I just wish I could make her understand me and how I feel" Melody sighed.

"Mel, she does understand. She's just trying to keep you safe" Tip said patting her on the shoulder.

"Trying to keep me safe! Safe from what! He's my father Tip and I'm going to meet him!"



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Posted 27 September 2013 - 12:06 PM

What about "I don´t understand her?"




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