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#1 soccerisluv(:

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Posted 05 June 2009 - 07:18 PM

Okay, which idea sounds better?

Characters for both:
Mom=Shasta Jewel Rivera

Step Dad=Phil Lewis Rivera

Dad=Keith Troy Austen

Main Girl=Rose Starr Austen Rivera

Step Sister=Tatiana Dian Rivera



Idea One:
♥Shasta kidnapped Rose at birth away from country family, the Austens. When Shasta dies, Rose looks for records of her father, only to discover he is very much alive. She runs away from her step father, Phil, in order to find the father she has never known, and longs to find.


Idea Two:
♥Shasta and Keith are divorced. Shasta lives with Phil, Tatiana, and Starr (Rose). When Shasta dies, Starr is forced to live with a father she has never known in the country because Phil never wanted anything to do with her.


Do they make sense enough for you to pick your fave?

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Posted 05 June 2009 - 08:27 PM

I think that the first one would be more fun to write!

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Posted 05 June 2009 - 08:28 PM

That is what I was leaning towards, thanks!

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Posted 06 June 2009 - 03:38 AM

Yeah, I think the first one looks better, Good luck!

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Posted 06 June 2009 - 08:35 AM

Rivera



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I agree. Idea one sounds more fun and original!


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Posted 06 June 2009 - 09:37 AM

Thanks, Zayda and Gwyneth!

LOL, I thought of Rivera b/c I was on BNG when I came up with the story!

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Posted 07 June 2009 - 08:34 AM

I, actually, like the second one best :blink: I personaly think it sounds more realistic, though the first one would probubly be more fun to write. GL! ~Hayden

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Posted 07 June 2009 - 12:13 PM

I, actually, like the second one best ;) I personaly think it sounds more realistic, though the first one would probubly be more fun to write. GL! ~Hayden



Thanks, I wanted honest feedback, and it is good to hear that not everyone likes the first best. I am leaning toward the first, but I will play around with both.
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Posted 08 June 2009 - 10:08 PM

I agree with Hayden Taylor

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Posted 08 June 2009 - 10:16 PM

1 is more of an action packed story, whereas number 2 could be realistic fiction. So I guess whichever you'd enjoy writing more! Personally, I like the first one, because it's more unique.

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Posted 10 June 2009 - 02:21 PM

First one all the way!

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Posted 04 July 2009 - 11:41 AM

First one definitely!

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Posted 05 July 2009 - 12:53 PM

I like the second one, but you could sort of mix the two up. Phil forces her to leave, but her real dad doesn't know about her. Phil gives her barely enough money to make it to [some town] where he supposedley lives, but her dad is a spy and has many enemies. The town where he is supposed to live is just a decoy. When she arrives at his house, she is kidnapped by one of the more deadly and influential enemies. Her dad must then save her. If you wanted some romance, her dad could have like an apprentice spy who has to be his "partner" for a year.

I know, it's totally random. Just my thoughts, though the second one alone is still my favorite.




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