Very Urgent Question
Posted 05 June 2009 - 07:18 PM
Characters for both:
Mom=Shasta Jewel Rivera
Step Dad=Phil Lewis Rivera
Dad=Keith Troy Austen
Main Girl=Rose Starr Austen Rivera
Step Sister=Tatiana Dian Rivera
♥Shasta kidnapped Rose at birth away from country family, the Austens. When Shasta dies, Rose looks for records of her father, only to discover he is very much alive. She runs away from her step father, Phil, in order to find the father she has never known, and longs to find.
♥Shasta and Keith are divorced. Shasta lives with Phil, Tatiana, and Starr (Rose). When Shasta dies, Starr is forced to live with a father she has never known in the country because Phil never wanted anything to do with her.
Do they make sense enough for you to pick your fave?
Posted 05 June 2009 - 08:27 PM
Posted 06 June 2009 - 08:35 AM
I agree. Idea one sounds more fun and original!
Posted 06 June 2009 - 09:37 AM
LOL, I thought of Rivera b/c I was on BNG when I came up with the story!
Posted 07 June 2009 - 08:34 AM
Posted 07 June 2009 - 12:13 PM
I, actually, like the second one best I personaly think it sounds more realistic, though the first one would probubly be more fun to write. GL! ~Hayden
Thanks, I wanted honest feedback, and it is good to hear that not everyone likes the first best. I am leaning toward the first, but I will play around with both.
Posted 08 June 2009 - 10:16 PM
Posted 05 July 2009 - 12:53 PM
I know, it's totally random. Just my thoughts, though the second one alone is still my favorite.
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