Inspired by a friend :P
Posted 16 July 2009 - 12:33 PM
Main Charector: Ophelia Cox. Her parents divorced when she was little, and she just gets randomly shipped to either parents house. Kinda feels unloved that her parents are this way with her. She's inwardly bubbly and sweet, but she keeps her emotions to herself because her Mom is very dramatic and hates all the emotions she always see's. Acts indifferent towards others exept her one friend, Malachai. She has a hard time with stability in her life, so every other "friend" she's had doesn't stay long.
Best friend of main charector: Malachai (?). He loves Ophelia (only as a friend throughout the whole story) and tries to protect her, but doesn't say so aloud. He helps her get together with a boy she likes but wont admit into liking. Is the only person that Ophelia acts totaly herself around.
Needs last name (prefer a very masculine last name for him)
Guy Ophelia likes: Cayden. (would it be weird for the name to be so close to mine? I don't plan on publishing or anything). Very handsome and sweet. Athletic. Suddenly got popular once he cut his hair (that was very long before). A bunch of girls like him, but he choses Ophelia over the popular girls cause he feels she actually loves him though she acts somewhat mean toward him at first.
Needs last name
MC's Mom: Rachel Cox. She's can't stand in the same room as her ex-husband without screaming, blaming, (etc) him. Is always telling Ophelia that love isn't worth the while, and is the main reason to why Ophelia is the way she is about emotions. Barily makes enough money to support herself and Ophelia, but wants Ophelia to permanently stay with her and not her ex-husband (at all).
Not sure if she should have a different name than Ophelia, WDYT?
MC's Dad: Derek Cox. Generally pleasant, but he has a little more self control over his anger at Rachel. But he still doesn't give Ophelia the attention she needs/deserves. Also wants Ophelia to stay with him and not Rachel, he makes a little more income than Rachel and can afford to keep her better.
Not sure if he should be the one to have a different last name, or Rachel.
And not completely sure on the first name.
Thanks bunches for all help! ~Hayden
Posted 16 July 2009 - 12:43 PM
Umm I would change Rachels Last name since they are divorced... But they dont have to be. My bf's moms last name is her maiden name - her ex husbands name...
Derek is a good fn
It sounds like a really intressting story...
Posted 16 July 2009 - 12:51 PM
Though I dont care for Malachai Johnson (Johnson being the last name of my most recent ex-boyfriend ). Does Malachai look better this way or Malachi? Or Malachy? NN Mally
Hmm, I need last names for Rachel then. I was thinking Rachel Greene, but for some reason I keep thinking of somebody saying a TV charectors name was something like that . . .
Thanks, Becca! Any more suggestions, please? ~Hayden
Posted 17 July 2009 - 08:51 AM
Any last name or first name suggestions for Ophelia Cox?
I have Cayden Walsh as a final name.
Does Malachi, Malachy, or Malachai look better? I need last names for him too!
Posted 17 July 2009 - 11:02 AM
Okay, I just noticed something and I need either a different first name or a different last name for Ophelia I didn't realize how it sounded until I was telling my friend about it. . .
Haha, I see what you mean.
Something short, definitely...what about Ophelia Scott? What do you think?
Posted 19 July 2009 - 04:44 PM
Umm. I LOVE all the names you have so far! They're all quite uncommon, but GREAT! Love Malachai like this, or Malachi.
Posted 19 July 2009 - 06:01 PM
Rachel Green is a character in FRIENDS.
Haha, she is.
I'm glad you like Ophelia Scott.
Posted 26 July 2009 - 08:10 AM
Umm.....Kinda funny, my friend's half brother is named Malachai. I like it spelled that way. Malachai Jameson? Malachai Smith? Malachai Robinson? Hope these help!
Posted 27 July 2009 - 03:17 PM
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