Hey, i'm writing a sorta of fantasy story about a common elf who works as one of hundreds of servants in the Elf King's castle.
the story: she gets noticed by the prince by chance. he like her. three reasons he can't touch her is that she isn't his tribe, she's a hybrid and she is a commoner. (he is a land elf, she is a tree/water elf) crossing tribes isn't not heard of, but it is highly looked down upon. but he doesn't care. he pursues her. she gets pregnant and now is having a baby who will shake up the story really bad. the kind kicks her out after finding out but she as no reason to give her friends in the castle why, she can't go and tell everyone it was the prince who fathers her baby. so she leaves the town to search for husband and work somewhere else.
but...the prince gets a wake up call after years pass. his love, his child and his throne is at stake as someone finds out about the little princess. remembering his love for the mother, he hopes she will love him after his father kicked her out so many years ago. what will be done with the information that was hidden for so long. with the princess take the throne or will that person finely get what he/she wants. the king taken down...but for what reasons would they want that??
so not the best story in the world, but hey...
if you have any suggestions for the prince, king or even the mother and daughter... your welcome to give them. thanks
Family of Elves
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dancingT-Owl
, Oct 24 2010 05:09 PM
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#1
Posted 24 October 2010 - 05:08 PM
#2
Posted 27 October 2010 - 10:03 AM
Sounds really cute! I either like Azalea or Dahlia as the babies name- such a cute sounding name! And Adaire seems to just fit really well
~Haddie
~Haddie
#3
Posted 06 November 2010 - 06:36 PM
Azalea and Adaire are perfect! It's cute how they sort of match, too
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