I'm basically rounding out my story and naming the characters. I want to know if the names fit the pictures and the description.
Basic Plot: Jillian believes she is cursed. Her life has been filled with bad luck and one misfortune after another for the last seven years. And when her boss' son, Thomas, is cursed, he enlists (blackmails) Jillian into helping him find out how to break it and who did it. All because he saw her the night he was cursed! Now, Jillian is forced to help a guy that she can't stand, being dragged through a world she never knew existed and constantly running into trouble because of her streak of bad luck!
Jillian Romney: She is cynical, sharp-tongued, pessimistic, practical, no-nonsense, astute, and jaded. She comes across mean, apathetic and snarky but is generally a quiet and insecure girl.
Thomas Carroll: He is sociable, mischievous, fun-loving, easy-going, quick-witted, articulate, adventurous and a playboy. Despite his hedonistic and devil-may-care approach, he is very good with money and business. He has an arrogant and selfish streak.
Beau Hart: Outwardly, he is charismatic, cheerful, pleasant, laidback and outgoing. However, he is devious, conniving, smooth-talking, unstable, ill-tempered, a good liar/actor and quick on his feet. He hates when he loses or things don't go his way. Comes from a line of magic and uses it for twisted ways and self gain. He is the cause for the main girl's bad luck.
Opinions. Advice.
Started by
Lazuli
, Dec 26 2009 10:10 PM
5 replies to this topic
#1
Posted 26 December 2009 - 10:10 PM
#2
Posted 27 December 2009 - 06:23 PM
I like it!
#3
Posted 29 December 2009 - 06:07 AM
yep. the names fit them very well. And I really really love your whole idea
#4
Posted 02 January 2010 - 04:42 PM
love the story idea! and the names are great although Jillian seems a bit old for the girl in the picture - I'd prefer Lillian nn Lily
#5
Posted 27 February 2010 - 10:36 PM
love the story idea! and the names are great although Jillian seems a bit old for the girl in the picture - I'd prefer Lillian nn Lily
I've been thinking about my story again and though I like Jillian and Thomas, I'm having trouble thinking them in this sort of story. So, I need help with the two main characters.
I'm thinking Aspen for the main character and Audrey for her older sister. Maybe Noah for 'Thomas'. WDYT?
#6
Posted 27 February 2010 - 11:50 PM
I do like Noah better for the guy. I don't know, but EVERY Thomas I have met has had dark brown hair! Weird. Anyway, I think Noah and Aspen work well.
GL
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