I am writing a story about a family with five children. I am having a hard time deciding the order the children are in. Here are my ideas:
Choice 1:
Twin boys : 6 y/o
Girl : 4 y/o
Twin boys : 1 y/o
Choice 2:
Boy : 6 y/o
Boy : 5 y/o
Girl : 3 y/o
Twin boys : 1 y/o
Choice 3:
Girl : 5 y/o
Twin boys : 3 y/o
Twin boys : 1 y/o
Choice 4:
Girl : 6 y/o
Boy : 4 y/o
Boy : 3 y/o
Twin boys : 1 y/o
Choice 5:
Girl : 4 or 5 y/o
Quad boys : 1 y/o
Any input would be great. Thanks.
Need some help...
Started by
Noah
, Nov 28 2009 07:15 PM
3 replies to this topic
#1
Posted 28 November 2009 - 07:15 PM
#2
Posted 28 November 2009 - 07:55 PM
I think it would have to depend on your story line. A quick synopsis would help a lot, if you can.
~alyssa
~alyssa
#3
Posted 28 November 2009 - 08:09 PM
After a car accident the five kids are left orphaned. Neither of their parents had family, so the kids are left to their Godmother. They kids are in the car during the accident.
The accident was head on. At the time of the accident the youngest are only 3 months old, and will later be 1 y/o. The youngest are unharmed as they are safe in their car seats with a mesh car seat cover that keeps the glass from hurting them. If two of the boys are older they would end up with some cuts and bruises. The daughter is the only one with any real injury, along with cuts and bruises she gets a broke arm.
Do you need more?
The accident was head on. At the time of the accident the youngest are only 3 months old, and will later be 1 y/o. The youngest are unharmed as they are safe in their car seats with a mesh car seat cover that keeps the glass from hurting them. If two of the boys are older they would end up with some cuts and bruises. The daughter is the only one with any real injury, along with cuts and bruises she gets a broke arm.
Do you need more?
#4
Posted 29 November 2009 - 01:11 PM
Thanks!
I think:
Boy -- 6 y/o
Girl/Boy twins -- 5 y/o
Boy -- 3 y/o
Boy -- 3 months
Or of your options, I like Choice 2 or Choice 4.
Good luck, I hope I helped!
~alyssa
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